Engineers are encouraged to write simply for clear communication. You want the your audience to focus on your ideas, not the language you use.
Unnecessary words included | Unnecessary words removed | Reason |
zinc metal | zinc | Zinc can only be a metal. |
the barrels of oil | barrels of oil | Unnecessary use of 'of' |
in order to | to | Shorter and means the same. |
Here the issue is not that the reader won’t understand the language, but rather that certain words (those that are more formal, flowery or pompous) slow the reader down. For example, ‘initiate’ rather than ‘start’.
You want the message, rather than the language, to hold the reader’s attention. You want to write in a clear, professional way without being overly formal or showy.
Beer, D, McMurrey, D, 1997, Writing as an Engineer. New York: John Wiley & Sons.
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